Now we know who really wrote that book

[brightlotusmoon]

This is made of pure gold and win and has completely brightened my mood:
Pat Robertson's Meeting With God...Doesn't Go How He Wants It

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[brightlotusmoon.livejournal.com]

It is glaring and awkward, and I wonder if anyone else will see that. And you know, your guess may be right.

[tokio.livejournal.com]

Ohh, by the way! I got your chapters. :) Would you like any feedback as I read? There are a few things I feel like I should tell you because I don't typically read "fantasy novels," for lack of a better term. I thought maybe you might want to hear something from the perspective of a demographic that would be less likely to pick up the book if they saw it on the shelves in that section, you know? Just let me know!

[brightlotusmoon.livejournal.com]

Yes, do give me feedback -- in fact, I welcome a good critique from someone not in my target demographic. If you point out all the flaws that I already feel, I'd be happy and we can compare what sucks and what doesn't!

[tokio.livejournal.com]

Awesome! I'll shoot you a message soon. I've only read the first chapter so far. I was busy when I checked my e-mail. :|

[brightlotusmoon.livejournal.com]

Yay! I actually updated my LJ with such news. Also, because I'm writing. In the book. In the current chapter. Damn, my villain is weird.

[tokio.livejournal.com]

Nothing bad, of course. They were just some thoughts I had while reading it. While reading it, I tried to detach from the fact that I know you.

[brightlotusmoon.livejournal.com]

Oh, okay! That's good, then. I look forward to hearing your thoughts!